Review for The Mistake

The Mistake

(#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-14

A lovely chapter (hence, the rating point).

Despite all it's bad luck-yness and the sadness I found it quite humorous at points. I have a supsicion that this was intentional (e.g. the underwear thing) but if it happened by chance, don't be offended. I find humor in the weirdest kind of places (e.g. my own head).

Whenever I reach the bottom of a page I wonder what the plonk will happen next???

Author's response

No, the humor is not by chance, I kind-of want the sadness to have some funny elements, or else who would want to read it? The underwear thing will prob. come into play later as long as I don't change my mind. I'm so glad you're enjoying it!