First of all "06:06:06." Creepy.
Alright, on to the review. I find myself getting so into this story that when I finish a chapter I have to look around just to make sure my mind has made it back to the present in one piece. You are doing great things with your writting. Thanks for the wonderfully, original story. Oh yeah, and for the smidgen of P-Rack.
Author's response
I wonder if you're the only reader who got that reference. Ah well, what can I say? I'm an idiot. ;)
Ha ha, nice. (No pun intended... well, actually, there is.) :) Thank you so much for this overly encouraging review. I think I just grew taller than Pete Wentz... Wait. I was taller than him before...