Aw, I feel so bad for Pete. I mean, he's stuck in this room, supposedly "dead" and he's realized that he made some mistakes regarding how he treated his friends. You can really sense progression, you can sense that he has changed. Very well written, my love. I owe you a rating point.
Author's response
I think those quotation marks are a bit misplaced there, dude. ;)
Thanks for making me believe I did a good job on the "personality" change. ;)
Don't fret it about the points. I know how it sucks when you only have a very limited amount of them at your disposal when you start out. :)