Review for This Curse on Your Lips

This Curse on Your Lips

(#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-16

FG to the review section, please! FG to the review section!...

GET YOUR LAZY ASS TO THE REVIEW SECTION, FROSTEDGLASS!!!

Hello. Here I am...

"Zacky-Poo" -> Ha ha. ;)

I love how Pete gives Zacky-Poo a piece of his mind over the phone. I never liked Pete Wentz more. :)

Pete pretending to have helped cleaning up the apartment. -> HA HA. Plonkily, dunkely, neighbor.

I love the fact that they played Monopoly. I had them play that boardgame in one of my stories as well because I love it so much.

I laughed out loud about Kade asking Pete if he hitched a tent when she did that shot. I like boys in awkward situations. Especially when they're sexual...

Just keep on producing funny fic like this chapter and I'll keep on reviewing.

Take a goddamn rating point, you show-off... ;)

Author's response

hehe. i had to make pete a little cocky. haha. I love monopoly! hehe I was laughing while i was typing the part about pitching a tent! my dad just stared at me like I was crazy! haha point taken! haha.