Go Luna! I wouldn't put it past her to have something sharp and pointy on hand in case her wand got snitched.
"Granger had emplaced runic shields around Bones and himself" Uh... Did Hermione have an operation that we don't know about?
You say "the girls" a little too often. It's as if Voldemort was thinking, "How shall I lure Harry Potter? Ah! With hot chicks!"
Snape seems a little too big to get scooped up. Plus, couldn't Hermione just levitate him like at the end of PoA?
I don't buy Dumbledore's motivation.
Author's response
Well, "Granger had emplaced runic shields around Bones and himself" I meant Bones and Snape. I'll look at it.
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