Oh Dear..
This is the second piece I've read, and I'm going to have to read every other Remus/Sirius fic you've written.
Great work. You have a good knack for capturing their personalities, although I might feel edgy about how nice Wormtail seems. Oh Well, Great Stuff!
Author's response
That is praise indeed. I'm glad you think I have captured them well.
As for Wormtail - remember, he was part of their close clique at school, and at some point, he was a nice person. I always like to think that perhaps he did what he did to try to save his friends.