You did a wonderful job adding insight to Kyoya's thoughts on Haruhi. I'd like to see a sequel to this, and see when Haruhi does come into her own and which of the boys ARE still around & if she does end up with Kyoya.
Author's response
Thanks for this feedback! There are possibly 3 more stories in the works, continuing from here, and the next in series should be up soon.
I'm so pleased you enjoyed this, and appreciate the comment very much.