Hey I saw your sequel to this so I decided to take your advice and read this first! so far I only read couple of chapters but I have also downloaded it glancing at it while doing so to read later, got to go to work, bummer! but anyway so far the story is damn good but I got to tell ya, either your lazy, have really bad writing skills or your program downloaded to this site with the really bad spacing in the story! If the program did it or you did it on purpose then you really need to fix this, because in my opionion it is really unprofessional! and would get you bad grades in school at least when I went. I guess if you did on purpose then you remind me of the people that are told to write a 10 page essay but they only write a one page and then space it out to make it fit! if you didnt do this on purpose then I do apologize for my comments, its just I dont like it when I see stuff like this.
Author's response
I have NOTHING to do with the spacing on this site.I tried making it closer together, but just got one continuous paragraph. I don't like it either, sweetie, but it can't be helped.
You could try any of the sites where this story resides ( with proper spacing ) if that would help.
Try fanfiction.net search for Holly Ilex as the chapters are properly spaced and won't give you a headache.
Ilex
P.S.
Glad you like it, so far.
After you get about 5 chapters into it, read my one shot and it'll make a lot of sense about Anna and Christopher and Severus and their friendship dynamic.
Ilex
P.P.S.
I'm 57 years old and my days of writing compositions are LONG gone, so, considering this is the first story I've EVER done, it's been a challenge to dig up all those rules of grammar and spelling! thank GOd for spell check!
HE!HE!HE!