Well i for one loved it! Some beautiful description in there.
"soft organ music bounced off of every corner displaying the beautiful acoustics of the room" Really good.
Just shows that you dont have to involve another character to create a brilliant piece of work. Loved it! Thanks for taking part in the challenge!XX
Author's response
yea...I tend to write kinda "flowery". I like descriptive terms. My creative writing professor before I graduated used to yell at me all the time for it and tell me it was going to "cheapen my words". So I'm glad you liked it.