I am so impressed with this piece! I love how you made Pete so good- most write him as a badass, but you pull off a 'good Pete' wonderfully. I also like the fact that you made this soley about Christmas and not a romantic interest. Great job!
Author's response
thanks so much for your kind words. :) I kinda can't stand pete--its actually a running joke with my friends who know I like FOB, so for me to write him as anything other then self obsessed and obnoxious was a challenge that I wanted to give myself. :)