Review for Third Rescue

Third Rescue

(#) annadb8goddess 2006-12-20

This is actually one of the first Fanfics I've read on this site and one I constantly revisit. I think you did a wonderful job at it. Though I think when they talk about Riza's injury their both a little out of character and the fact that the injury isn't mentioned the rest of the story. But if You think I'm wrong don't touch it. I'm still pretty new at this.