you have got to be kidding when you say that it is going to take another twelve months until the next chapter. what kind of writer are you that you keep people who like this story in suspense for so long a period. Couldn't you at least update one a month.
As to your story i think that is has alot of potential. things are going well and i look forward to more chapters in the near future. keep up the good work and i look forward to more chapters