Agh! Where's the countdown?
This was amazing, of course. The way he just accepts everything he's done wrong now. And a song I've never heard before, the lyrics just sum up what you've been doing with this story so beautifully. I'm away to find it and have a listen. That's how much I adore this story. Have your point, u point thief ;-)
Author's response
It's a real good song. :) Personally, I like to think of myself as a pick-pocket.
Thanks for the r&r...&r. ;)