Well, it’s written well. (Gods, that has to be redundant!) I’m intrigued and that, is a sign in which you have to continue and update soon or suffer something from… my …wrath? laughs No- Anyway, it’s great… the writing it totally distinguishable from a shallow one and yours isn’t shoal at all, it’s perfectly fine.
I would just have to ask why there are weird symbols. The quotation mark is replaced with something like this: ¡® and all the other marks are jumbled as well.
Oh, I would have to ask if this is correct:
His body however held no confusion as he wrapped his arms around Hermione and spoke to her in a strange language but somehow he understood it.
Isn’t it supposed to be:
“Language but somehow ‘she’ understood it.”
Anyway, like I said… update soon but I’m not sure if I can write a review right after you post your next chapter seeing that I still haven’t found anything that would alert me, unlike in ff.net where they do have alerts. Could you send me an email when you update then? My email address is ty.michelle@gmail.com
Thanks.