I think this is a pretty good story.. I liked the way you made the unspeakables no better than Voldy..The first 5 chaps were good, but i found chap 6 a little boring..
Overall i liked the story and can't wait for an update...
Author's response
Glad you're enjoying it so far. Sorry you found the latest chapter boring. There was a good bit of groundwork that I had to lay in this chapter, I tried to keep it as interesting as I could, but, oh well, I guess they can't all be Zingers. Hope you'll continue to follow along.