I rememer reading this story before and thought it really weel written. I noticed you tweaked it a bit a introduced shingo as a major character but then half way through he disappears. I dont know if you noticed that but its a bit strange. Great story with no visible problems other than that.
Author's response
I'm working on the fight lineup for the tourny and I've been debating who he should fight. I'm also thinking of him doing a bit of snooping for the Chosen of Earth Realm (the reason he'll be not so visible in recently posted chapters) but still debating what trouble he'll run into.
With it being Shingo of couse, he'll find himself up to his ears in mayhem snicker