Hey! I'm gonna review for both chapters together here cause I'm lazy like that.
I really like your story idea! I'm UBER curious about what she's hiding. Man that sucks when you don't know. Yet I do it harshly in my stories too LOL.
The only thing I'd critz about it is the typos and sometimes you forget a word here and there. It made me re-read the sentence over again. But other than that, nice length to it, nice details, and nice plot that's driving us all crazy.
Update soon, and Happy Holidays to you as well.