Review for What's Christmas without cliches?

What's Christmas without cliches?

(#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-21

Well, I’m glad you had that long train ride. Not only because I’m an asshole I like to show some schadenfreude, but also because this one-shot is a real Christmas gift.

"Do I know you?" Pete reeled. He didn't look like a Fall Out Boy fan. And Pete was sure he would remember this guy. -> Ha ha ha!

"This isn't Dickens, Peter. God, you were arrogant. I never really believed it," -> HA HA HA!

Wow.

FrostedGlass doesn’t mind at all. And Alex thinks this story is amazing! :)

You ordered a rating point, I hear?

Author's response

Glad you don't mind me kind of pinching bits of your idea considering I think this is a bit of a turkey (but a Christmas one at that). And thank you for rating it. I needed a break from 'This is the last time' because it is doing my head in. Writers block galore! Hope I've been good this year and santa brings me some fresh ideas.
Merry christmas xx