RoyEd smut... tasty! ;) Okay, first thing's first, this story's got a lot of errors. the grammar and punctuation were pretty bad. I recomend you go back and correct the chapter.
BUT, for every bad thing, there is something good, no? I love the story set up, you know, the murder case! The idea itself (roy and ed working on a case together) could help bring the two together, BUT it could also cause problems! There is a thing as too much of one person! I can see a lot of friction between those two that could cause sooo many issues! But it's always fun to see Roy and Ed work out their differences and come to love each other even more! :3
The idea just sets you up for a ficload of fun! :D I hope you continue, and if you ever need help, ideas, a beta, feel free to ask me!
I hope to see more!
-Kay