This story is really, really cool. Enjoying it greatly. An excellent abandoned-Harry fic. Since it's heading in a HHr direction, you should consider putting it on Portkey. You'll get more reviews there. But don't post all your 22 chapters at once - post one a day till both sites are at the same level of the story.
Author's response
Thanks. Glad you enjoy reading it. Never thought to x-post my story to other HP sites. I'll keep it in mind.