hmmm...I liked it. and yet...I'm strangly lost.
I think it's cause Pete didn't magically turn alive or something else "typically fanfic". Although considering its your wonderful writing I should be smacked for even thinking for a second something typical would happen.
I hate that you can make me like Pete. Your're probably the only person who can.
But I love your writing.
Beware of December 25th? yikes. that sounds ominous.
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"Strangely lost" makes me think of Emily the Strange. And her lost ways. I'm a fan. points at new Emily the Strange belt she's wearing I'm a dorky fan. Who loves to ramble...
Thanks, I'm trying to be a(lex)typical.
Sorry about your Pete-related identity crisis. Happens to the best of us sometimes. ;)
I love your writing back so we're even. Have a safe Christmas! :)