Just from the title and the summary I could tell that this is a brilliant concept, Britain. I’m guessing we’ll be blessed with a new chapter each day. (Which means this story will be over on my birthday. How subtle of me.) OH, JOY! :)
Crisp, white, fluffy particles of snow that had brought misery to the traffic in the city but pure delight to the children and children like adults everywhere. -> Neato.
“disaproving of his sheer adorableness” -> Do you actually know what you’re talking about? :P
I love how you give the dates of the life of Ella’s mother on the tombstone and then a flashback to the day she died.
I want the next day to come quickly too so I can read more of this goodness!
This calls for some plonk… be careful when you drink it, I placed a rating point at the bottom of the glass.
Love ya much!
Author's response
thank you for warning about the rating point, nearly gagged on it! I miss you.... :(