Review for Eden
I love these types of stories that elaborate on little, almost throw away points in the game--they really flesh out the game and the universe it's set in. I also liked how you showed the consequences of drawing something like Eden and having what's basically a god take up residence in your head--I always thought that would be rather traumatic, but the characters never seem to have any problem with it, lol. Your characterizations also seemed to ring true to me--and I particularly liked your Irvine.
I didn't notice anything in the way of flaws or errors, so I don't have much in the way of constructive criticism to offer--sorry! I just really enjoyed the fic!