FicWad

Wow, what a fantastic story. Somehow you managed to turn a classic storyline into something new and fresh. The words you used and the way you made the characters speak seemed very believable and in character, which is a very good thing. A lot of people fail to turn Darren and Daniel into believable characters, but you managed to do so, and extremely well at that. Also, it's nice to see a new writer who actually seems to care about writing. There are so many bad stories with horribly bad grammar and badly written plots and characters in this fandom these days, so believe me what I say this story is like a fresh breeze on a hot summer's day :D