I really like the story. Could you give me a link to SIYE. I can't find the site. Update soon!
Author's response
Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. SIYE has been having some site problems lately. They've been under some kind of DDoS attack or something along those lines, it hasn't been made particularly clear. Their usual URL is "www.siye.co.uk", but if it times out or gives errors, well, that's what we've all been getting for the past week. I should have the other chapters up tonight or tomorrow here on FW.