so i printed out a million pages of updates and i'm still not caught up.
i must say the culmination of this story was refreshingly "deeper" than i expected it to be. it actually made me a little less apprehensive about the afterlife, so i'm rating it as insightful. (EDIT: i wrote this last night, before i found out that ficwad has a rating point nazi, and i can't rate it because it's been rated too many times. i've ran into this problem with every chapter of the stories you've updated… not only this but also "The Curse of the Curls". i am pissed. anywho.)
laura.
the perfect character to explain things to pete. i love the explanation of the afterlife. i am honestly in love with it. you brought a lot to fanfiction in general with this story. you are a truely gifted writer...not only because this story reads magnificently, but you took a whole "genre" (if you will allow such terrible terminology) of writing and transformed it from "typical" to "extraordinary".
"So the afterlife is Communism." ha.
anyway, thank you for this story.
oh, and i miss you.
Author's response
Thank you for this review. Call me lame and you're right. I was hoping you'd review the last chapter sometime because your opinion is among those ones who I value the most.
Also, thanks for catching up on all my stuff so fast. Without you there'd be no DoJ and it's more than obvious why. :) DoJhuggage