This is a wonderful story and I enjoyed it immensely. I really think you should get it published! It has a very interesting plot line and you have a lot of skill as a writer. I loved Deidre. She has a good-bad personality that I really like, and I loved how Dennis reacted to being a werewolf. I loved the description of him in wolf form, as well! The different ghosts in the bedroom intrigued me, as well as all the books and interesting history of the Gravesend family. This was a very well thought out and enjoyable story, and I hope you keep writing! :)
Author's response
Thanks. I want to develop this story a little more, add other tidbits of Gravesend history and make it a length worth publishing.