"Hey you. So, Jamie and I just had a very interesting chat about the Road Runner." -> Geek. Yumm-EY!
/"Finally I'm taller then someone." Patrick grinned down at the little boy, "Put'er there kiddo." He added sticking his palm out for a high five. While Jamie just looked at him funny before turning to his sister and saying,
"I think I take back what I said about him being cool."/ -> And this is mainly why I rated the chapter “funny”. This and all the other hilarious stuff.
Ha, Joe is the shit too. :)
Molly settled Jamie down with crayons, coloring books, and action figures that Pete just so happened to have lying around the house. 'I'm not going to ask. and strangly am not surprised in the slightest' Molly thought to herself -> Yeah… I just watched a three-part fuse interview that was partly set at Pete’s parents’s house. Definitely, yeah.
Author's response
lol yup. Patrick is a total geek. Boys+Cartoons and all that.
I had such a hard time writing Jamie, I feel like he came across as a small teenager. lol.
Joe is the shit. I figure if I'm married to him in your story then I should probably make him cool. ha.
Yes. Peter with the Peter Pan complex. nuff said.