OH. PROBLEMOS IN THE PARADISE.
I wonder how is Bob gonna take the (POSSIBLE) news.
well, anyray, this was again great. you always find a way to suprise ppl, or at least me, and thats so important. keep em comin.
[ im givin your story reviews so often you're starting to think im som stalker right?:] ]
Author's response
I've always wanted my own personal stalker :]
This plot twist came as a suprise to people and that was what I was hoping for. I have to admit sometimes I start writing and the plot comes as a suprise to me too!!