wow....first time i could rate this story because all the other times, it was already rated too good....
love it that you write about what happens besides the main plot! i just completes the story with funny and full details!
especially vernon is great written!
maybe hestia is a bit too mean, but she is also an unknown quantity in canon, and the fact that this is fanfiction makes it as well as could be reasonable use of an character...and further torment of the dursleys....