Review for To Fight the Coming Darkness

To Fight the Coming Darkness

(#) slickrcbd 2007-01-06

I don't understand why Bill would obliviate Aimee if he was going to kill her. After all, dead [wo]men tell no tales. I can't see this as necessary unless you're either going to let her survive, or turn into an undead mummy.

Other than that nit-pick, well done.

Author's response

I believe I also answered this one on ffa. Thanks for reviewing in two places.~Jim