Review for To Fight the Coming Darkness

To Fight the Coming Darkness

(#) yojorocks 2006-04-23

Very nicely done, especially the concept of heir compulsion; I like how you explain everything instead of leaving the reader to infer or guess why things happen. Please keep up the excellent storyline crafting!

Author's response

Glad you appreciate the story for what it is - a desperate attempt by a guy approaching midlife crisis, who reads stories and deludes himself that he can do better. - Jim