this is pretty good. very original. like you, i've had it up to here with soul bonding, super harry, etc. your story is really refreshing, please post the continuation soon....
Author's response
I have always tried to avoid clichés. Of course I didn't manage to avoid them all, but I feel like I did pretty good work in that aspect. The sequel is progressing quite slowly at the moment as I've had (and still have) lots of trouble with chapter two. Chapters one and three are finished. All in all, I have written about 14000 words. It seems that the chapters are going to be considerably longer than in 'The Path Chosen', but I doubt anyone is complaining... It will take some time before I start uploading the sequel and I should probably get a beta first as some people have been commenting my article usage. Thanks for reading! Random Shinobi