Keeps getting better! I love how you write Optimus Prime, and how he is sort of acting like the father-figure for Shinji, that's great! And Misato cheering on Prime in the fight was perfect, I was doing the same thing--hey, he was my childhood hero too! I espeically love the end and Rei's conversation with the dinobots. G I hope you continue this, I'd love to see more.
Author's response
hey, thanks for the reviews and I'm glad you like!