Review for Lightning Marble

Lightning Marble

(#) Sindeniirelle 2005-06-04

I really like this. I think you captured both characters perfectly, it sounded exactly like Rikku's POV, and the descriptions of Lu were dead-on. Their personalities and the dialouge was all great. And the very end, when Lulu explained her fears, was so insightful and moving, especially the "lightning seems trivial now, doesn't it?" bit. Perfect. A+