Oh starlight... can I call you starlight? Hah. Anyway, without ff.net's handy story alert, I didn't realize you had updated! I really don't understand how there's a Zanessa C2 in existense, yet they delete one of the, if not THE best Zanessa story out there.
So enough of my griping, although this was just a short intro to the action -- [i'm hoping zanessa action. I mean c'mon, it's cold outside, blankets, no ashley? You're setting us up!] -- I loved every bit of it. You make every single character so likable and I love their conversations.
Again, loved it, I'll talk to you soon.
Author's response
Hey, check this out, I can respond to reviews like it's some kind of messageboard or something! Hot!
Anyway, of course you can call me starlight. And thanks so much for your review, as always. Want to know the weirdest thing about the whole ff.net deletion thing? About 10 min before it happened I was doing a little research on FF's origins and discovered all the controversies about FF's ever-tightening story policies and inconsistent deletion policies. Kind of hilarious that mine got the boot immediately after.
No matter. Time heals all wounds and I feel like I'm pretty much over it now. More writing shall commence. This story needs to be finished. (And yes, there may certainly be Zanessa around in the next chapter!)