First some of the good things. It really sounded like Ron speak to me. Seemed like the character as an young adult. Ron and Brick teaming up after High school? Well that is possible people mature over time. The referemces to the Show and the past was good. SheGo and Global Justice were nice added touches.
Negative stuff, the Playboy gig was right threre way easy and the phone call was too contrived. I belive a large magazine would be more professional then a mysterious phone Call. Why would the Dr. Director want to involve a mens magaize if she wanted nude photos of her self if she did not want them published? That is something she could have had done very discretly. I did not belive that.