I am very interested to see where this story is going. It's not often where Patrick isn't protrayed as a cute, adoreable, 'nice guy' type. Does that make sense? I'm still hopped up on the Nyquil.
I likes, totally.
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yeh makes total sense, which is somewhat the reason why I had portrayed him this way...although I must say that I am a bit nervous about treading outside that safty net...