wanted to tell you how much i enjoyed the chapter.. love the build up between susan and ginny and am finding the pace of your writing just right.. but THE best thing was penelope, just a little more narcissa like coldness when percy cottoned on would have been exquisite.. i applaud you good sir!
Author's response
If I ever go back to do rewrites, the Percy/Penny/Voldy scene is probably the most likely to get a rewrite.
Jim