This first chapter was a great read. It had a vivid setting and off-beat characters that kept me guessing. I'm really excited about this story and seeing how the characters came to be the way they are--kinda quirky, but all-together--and how they might change and develop. With the careful, colorful way you write, I'm certain you're gonna give us a hell of a fun time. And the love of music really comes through clearly. Thanks for the read!
Author's response
Aw, thank you very much! It means a lot to me that someone's enjoying this :)