Not to be insulting...But that was a boring chapter...I want more action in it. lol I mean he's in her room. Why doesn't he act like he could use to his advantage?
Author's response
THANK YOU. THANK YOU. Seriously. I'm glad you are so upfront and honest about this. Yeah, I know this chap. was kinda lame...but I'm really working on the next one. The last chapter was more transitional filler than anything else. And yes...advantage will be taken... smiles evilly