Review for The Mistake

The Mistake

(#) luckysgc921 2007-01-11

great chapter. and don't worry about it being short. patrick's short so it all even's out.
/ "Listen, I have to go do a few band things. Some kids won some sort of backstage passes or something and were promised some form of actual interaction with us, so..."/-->i just have to say with as much as this happens in fanfic i'd like to recieve these passes at some point in my life. kthanx.
Ava is blind to the fact that Matthew wants into her pants isn't she? wow. At least Patrick is aware and will protect what he has tracked and hunted...and I'll stop now.
great chapter.

Author's response

Hmm, I would love to recieve one as well. I don't actually know if they really exist or not (though I hope so), but that was the best I could do at four in the morning. ;)