Review for I miss...

I miss...

(#) Bitter-Irony 2007-01-11

Very nice poem--I especially like the little twist at the end.

A little nit-picky bit: the use of the word "sundry" was rather unexpected and it feels old-fashioned and out of place.

My favorite couplet was the third-to-last, because those are very much the things I miss most after a relationship.

Good job, keep up the good work!

~Bitter Irony

Author's response

Thank you. Regarding "sundry," I know it's old-fashioned, but I like the word. :) It's so classy.