Oh, and PS I was all excited about dropping some points on this story, but not only is this chapter completely full, so are all your others! Congrats! You rock! (Okay, so I use '!' a lot. Can't you see I can barely contain my excitement?)
Author's response
Hm, apparently I am a trickster too because people seem to think my crap is good. ;)
Nothing wrong with "!". Wiggie mainly speaks in exclamations...