Ha, glad I could be the fifth person to rate this literary goodness.
The whole jumping to the past and back to the present (or rather not to long-gone past) created perfect ambiance and a deeper insight into Tay's world. Kudos with pegacorns on top.
It just goes to show that you are a very talented and sensitive writer and you will go a long way, probably not only on ficwad. :)
Thank you for the reference. It bordered on being "izzy". ;)
Author's response
SQUEE! I love your reviews moose. (You realise i'll be calling you that permanantly from now on.) The jumping back and forward was risky for me, I didn't know wether it would cause confusion or not. Obviously it came across well, and I'm glad it did. I worked hard on that. :] And thank you. It's nice to know that people think I have talent. And I do plan on writing in the future, just to keep my mind working. It should be good. And you are welcome. I didn't know how to reference you, so I reference your amazing wiggie/alex country instead. :]