lol- brilliant!
are we supposed to like erin?...cos she COULD (not sayin' she was) have been bein' bitchy bout the surprise thing...i'd let Frabk surprise me anyday-lol. But anyway...if we're not supposed to like her then suggestion you could make her all mean to Elena and then Mikey could stand up for her or somethin'. Just a suggestion...:) You'll think of something I'm sure cos it's great so far...:)
Author's response
yes you are most deffinatley supposed to like erin! lol, i put that in there for humor purposes. but you have given me a good idea :D thanks for the review!