Review for Meek


(#) Ithilwen 2007-01-14

The word "hunger" is repeated too much, particularly in the beginning.

I don't know if "Meek" is the best title for this. You show Im'lee being clever and foolish and monstrous and pitiful, but you never show her meek.

That being said, it's absolutely fabulous. She misses her family both as friends and as food.