Chapter two read and read! "Eager" is a good way to describe how I feel about chapter three. Me want to read! Mercutio is a great character. His Devil-May-Care attitude is conveyed so well. I also liked reading about his unique bandmates. Even though they were only in the story for a little while, you gave us a really good idea about their personalities. Your descriptions are original and effective, and your voice really active and lively. Sweet!
Author's response
Mmm....now I really need to get to finishing chapter 3...it's been in progress for a few months. I write slow >O (By the way, Mercutio, Stefan, and Nicolas are three violins I own, while Hammie is my friend's violin. I based the characters in this story after them.)
Thanks again for the wonderful comments!