OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. I love the Male Bonding sequence that happens in this chapter with pee writing ones name in snow. Its something I took my kids up to the mountanins to play in the snow just for the sole reason to teach my sons how to write there names in the snow. This chapter made me laugh so hard I sprayed pop all over the place. DO keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)