Sigh. Why do you have to write so well? You suck me in! Darn you!
Anyway. Yes, I agree, OC's need love too. Being something of an OC writer myself...
But this isn't about me, it's about you. Great chappie. I love how you had Mr. Vega make his point. No pun intended. And am I right in thinking that Devon will be the next human visitor to the monster world? That she might make... friends, I suppose... with Randall, and he might take her along, either by accident or on purpose?
On purpose seems more likely, now that I think about it. After all, a human could do a lot of damage in the monster world - look at what Boo nearly did! So if Randall's out to hurt/destroy/make trouble, a human could help him a lot.
Still, Devon seems like a rational type... sort of. So how would he get her to help him...
I'm babbling. Great chapter, can't wait for another one - and can't wait to see why you've been so insistent that the time matters!